Tuhua,
Adventourus, challenging,
Twisted with emotion,
Thinking, Dangerous,
Live or Die
About Me
- laffydaffy
- I have 9 people in my family, i was born in yemen & wen i grow up i want 2 be ethier, prime minister, teacher, author, artist. My fave colour is orange, my fave food is pavalova, ice cream, pizza,chocolate. my fave animals are horses, dolphins and cats.If I could change one thing in the whole world, i would do something about the poverty in the world. My best friends are Gwen, Rebecca, rebecca, Tania, Rosie, Khatra.
3 comments:
Wow!
You are a very talented poet, and you use intersting, creative and descriptive language!
Maybe you should pursue a career in this!?
Good luck,
Aim
Thanks howdy, i love reading comments. Every time you give me feedback, I always get something out of it and you always give the reason why you like it. You rule
Hmmm... well, I haven't much of an eye or ear for poems but you could have done it better, no, I know you can do better. You're an amazing writer.
Urxan of the Black Silk
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